For my
second residency I brought a body of work that moved in a vastly
different direction from what I came with into the program. In the
new series, I was interested in the camera's recording of the
aesthetics of the passage of time and observing an urban
environment's potential narrative. The following are the themes and
issues that came up across critique sessions:
Conceptual:
The
lack of control/authorship is interesting.
Refine
the structure of the process before collaborating with other
artists.
Define
the process conceptually with what I am trying to accomplish.
There
is not enough specificity.
Define
what I want to say about time, society or surveillance.
Viewer/Audience:
How
much does the viewer complete the work?
There
isn't enough payoff for the viewer.
There
is too much information.
The
series need to be translated with a focal point.
I
need to define what I want the viewer to walk away with.
Viewers
need more help to arrive at the conclusion that I desire. A title
and description could be helpful. The artist statement should more
effectively direct the viewer.
Display
System:
Moving
forward:
Continue
to experiment more in different contexts.
What
really speaks to me?
Get
more complex.
Take
more risks in the location with higher stakes and a location with
more meaning.
Be
accountable for everything static detail in the frame.
Think
about the installation.
I
need to engage in a process that works for me.
I
need to define my engagement in social space, whether that be with
social media, a local community, or public and private space.
What
questions do I want to raise with the work?
What
is the significance of the location, time, or people?
What
is significant to me with what I'm exploring?
What
degree of engagement do I want with the people in the photos?
Find
a way to have a humanistic sense with generosity and community.
Artists:
Julia
Cher, Robert Frank, James Bolog, Jan Dibbets, Roberth Smith, Pierre
Huyghe, Zoe Leonard, Richard Mizrat, Sophie Calle, Trever Paylon, TJ
Wilcox, Martin Kersels, Alan Sekula Soo Kim, Louis Boltz, John
Dicola, Philip LiCordia, Teh Ching Shih, Dan Graham, Nakahira Takuma,
Theaster Gates,
Rick
Lowe, Steven Berens, Ed Ruscha, Roland Barthes “Mythologies”,
Judith Williamson “Decoding Advertisements”, Structuralist
photography, Serial photography, Harun Farocki, Carol Squires “What
is a Photograph?”, Wolfgang Staehle.